Writing 3

Name  : Agatha Tantri Windusari

NPM   : 12340035

Writing 3

1.      Write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

§  When write a paragraph, there are three component of paragraphs namely : Topic Sentence, Body or supporting sentence, and concluding sentence.

§  State the main idea of the paragraph in clearly constructed topic sentence. Make sure each sentence is related to the central thought. (Cohesion)

2.   Cohesion is achieved when writers connect their ideas with conjunction that connects between one sentence with another sentence, like the words 'finally,' 'thus,' 'however’, it facilitate the reader to read a paragraph.  Cohesion can also be called an adhesive between one word with another word so that it becomes a whole paragraph.

3.      What is Cohesion & Coherence?

Cohesion and coherence aren't too difficult to explain.  Cohesion refers to connectivity in a text.  Coherence refers to how easy it is to understand the writing.

4.                                          AGATHA TANTRI WINDUSARI

Well, let me introduce my self and I will tell all of about me, my family, my friends, my hobby and of course my simple and nice thing that I do.

My name Agatha Tantri Windusari , I am 20^th years old, I was born in Metro city on February, 16^th 1994 and my father gave me name Agatha Tantri Windusari, I think it is long name, but my friends call me Agatha or Tantri for short. Now, I am student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro  especially on english department and I am in 4^th semester. My origin is from Central Java and my religion is Catholic. Physically, I am no really tall and I have little fat body. I have yellow creamy skin, my eyes colour are dark brown and I have long hair the color is brown. My height about 153 cm and my weight around 53 kg. My blood type is B.

I live at Metro city, especially on Bumisari street No.15 Sumbersari Bantul, south Metro. I live with my little family of course with my parent and my brothers, I have two handsome brothers and they very kind and always protect me in every condition. The  best thing about me is my self, I can be my self not other people. I can be flexible with other people, so I can get more friends from that. Let me tell my hobby , my hobby is singing. Everyday I sing many song that I want, although my voice good enough. I like singing since in elementary school, and I ever follow singing class for three years. And singing is one of activity that I do in my free time. In my free time I try to gather my family and my boyfriend, and I do something nice. In my free time I usually lunch or dinner in restaurant with family or boyfriend.

 Well that’s all about me I hope it can be interesting for someone who read this story, Thank you J.

No	Sentence	Reason
1	I am student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro  especially on English department and I am in 4th semester	Because the sentence I am in 4th semester explain I am student in Muhammadiyah University of Metro .
2	I am not really tall and I have little fat body. I have yellow creamy skin, my eyes color are dark brown and I have long hair the color is brown.	Because that sentence is explain about me in pshysically. And it is relevance.
3	I have two handsome brothers and they very kind and always protect me in every condition	Because the sentence tells about my brothers who always kind with me.
4	I can be flexible with other people, so I can get more friends from that.	It is relevance sentence because it explain why i have much friends because I flexible with the others.
5	I like singing since in elementary school, and I ever follow singing class for three years.	The sentence I ever follow singing class for three years relevance with I like singing since in elementary school