writing 3

SINGING COMPETITION

Well, if we talk about achievement of course all of people ever feel their achievement, actually achievement is best thing in our life, you know way ? because achievement is something to be proud for our self, family and each other. So, when we get that achievement is part of our happiness. And this is my achievement that I ever got in last year is I got second winner in vocal group competition.

In 20^th November 2013 , sub district head held many competitions one of which is a vocal group competition. My friends and I are interested to follow the competitions  and we did the registration. Yustina, Fidel, Gega and I practiced every night for one week.

One day,  the singing competitions was begins, we were feel nervous and we were waiting for our turn to sing. Unfortunately Gega passed out before we perform singing group, we became more panic and nervous because one of our members is reduced.

Finaly, Yustina, Fidel and I changed our singing duties and the current formation stage, it is not easy but we have to do because we decided to continue the competition without one of our friends. Then we perform singing with the different circumstances, however we still showed singing with the maximum, because we does not want our practice every night becomes useless. And the last when the jury announced the winner, we waited anxiously. But after that we were happy because we got a champion competition vocal two of this group, and we got reward, trophies and certificates.

Well that all my story about singing competitions, even though we face the problem before the performance, but we were confident and show the best, it is the best way. This is achievement who make our parents proud of us.

Analysis Text

Topic sentence            : And this is my achievement that I ever got in last year is I got second

  winner in vocal group competition.

Supporting Sentence   : 1.  In 20^th November 2013 , sub district head held many competitions one of which is a vocal group competition. My friends and I are interested to follow the competitions  and we did the registration. Yustina, Fidel, Gega and I practiced every night for one week.

2. One day,  the singing competitions was begins, we were feel nervous and we were waiting for our turn to sing. Unfortunately Gega passed out before we perform singing group, we became more panic and nervous because one of our members is reduced.

3. Finaly, Yustina, Fidel and I changed our singing duties and the current formation stage, it is not easy but we have to do because we decided to continue the competition without one of our friends. Then we perform singing with the different circumstances, however we still showed singing with the maximum, because we does not want our practice every night becomes useless. And the last when the jury announced the winner, we waited anxiously. But after that we were happy because we got a champion competition vocal two of this group, and we got reward, trophies and certificates.

4. Well that all my story about singing competitions, even though we face the problem before the performance, but we were confident and show the best, it is the best way. This is achievement who make our parents proud of us.

Identifying Narrative Paragraph

1.      Title                             : Singing Competition

2.      Theme                         : Achievement

3.      Plot                              : Forward

4.   Character                     : Agatha (writer), Yustina, Gega and Fidel (Agatha’s patner)

5.    Setting of Place          : Sub district office

Setting of Time           : In 20^th November 2013, Last year.

Language Feature of The Text above

1.      Using Past tense                                  : Verb on that text use V2

2.      Using action verbs                              :  Follow

3.      Using specific participants                  : I, my friends, my group

4.      Using time conjunction                       : When, before, finally

5.      Using direct and indirect speech